We were all scared. We had our lives full of safety and there wasn’t any danger that would think to harm us. Even though we were near the ocean, there wasn’t really any potential danger. Or so we thought.
Everyone in town woke up to the tsunami warning, this felt different though; it didn’t feel like the usual drills. I looked outside my balcony window and saw the ocean rise. Then the weather changed to the worst.
The wind began to blow hard, taking trees out of the ground, the clouds turning dark, and rain began to shower. We never saw any potential danger until now.
Hi Sophie! What a fantastic 100WC entry this week. I really like the way the mood changes from the begining to the end, and there is a lovely rhythm to your sentences. You’ve included some good details, such as the ocean rising and the trees being taken out of the ground, and these really helped to paint a picture of the scene. Great job!